Saturday, September 29, 2012

Fairytales: Thumbelina Written by Hans Christian Anderson


Thumbelina
(Little Tiny)

by: Hans Christian Andersen


     There was once a woman who wished very much to have a little child, but she could not obtain her wish. At last she went to a witch, and said, "I should so very much like to have a little child; can you tell me where I can find one?"

    "Oh, that can be easily managed," said the witch. "Here is a barleycorn of a different kind to those which grow in the farmer's fields, and which the chickens eat; put it into a flower-pot, and see what will happen."

    "Thank you," said the woman, and she gave the witch twelve shillings, which was the price of the barleycorn. Then she went home and planted it, and immediately there grew up a large handsome flower, something like a tulip in appearance, but with its leaves tightly closed as if it were still a bud. "It is a beautiful flower," said the woman, and she kissed the red and golden colored leaves, and while she did so the flower opened, and she could see that it was a real tulip. Within the flower, upon the green velvet stamens, sat a very delicate and graceful little maiden. She was scarcely half as long as a thumb, and they gave her the name of "Thumbelina," or Tiny, because she was so small. A walnut shell, elegantly polished, served her for a cradle; her bed was formed of blue violet-leaves, with a roseleaf for a counterpane. 

    Here she slept at night, but during the day she amused herself on a table, where the woman had placed a plateful of water. Round this plate were wreaths of flowers with their stems in the water, and upon it floated a large tulip-leaf, which served Tiny for a boat. Here the little maiden sat and rowed herself from side to side, with two oars made of white horsehair. It really was a very pretty sight. Tiny could, also, sing so softly and sweetly that nothing like her singing had ever before been heard. One night, while she lay in her pretty bed, a large, ugly, wet toad crept through a broken pane of glass in the window, and leaped right upon the table where Tiny lay sleeping under her roseleaf quilt. "What a pretty little wife this would make for my son, said the toad, and she took up the walnut-shell in which little Tiny lay asleep, and jumped through the window with it into the garden.

    In the swampy margin of a broad stream in the garden lived the toad, with her son. He was uglier even than his mother, and when he saw the pretty little maiden in her elegant bed, he could only cry, "Croak, croak, croak."

    "Don't speak so loud, or she will wake," said the toad, "and then she might run away, for she is as light as swan's down. We will place her on one of the water-lily leaves out in the stream; it will be like an island to her, she is so light and small, and then she cannot escape; and, while she is away, we will make haste and prepare the state-room under the marsh, in which you are to live when you are married."

    Far out in the stream grew a number of water lilies, with broad green leaves, which seemed to float on the top of the water. The largest of these leaves appeared farther off than the rest, and the old toad swam out to it with the walnut-shell, in which little Tiny lay still asleep. The tiny little creature woke very early in the morning, and began to cry bitterly when she found where she was, for she could see nothing but water on every side of the large green leaf, and no way of reaching the land. Meanwhile the old toad was very busy under the marsh, decking her room with rushes and wild yellow flowers, to make it look pretty for her new daughter-in-law. Then she swam out with her ugly son to the leaf on which she had placed poor little Tiny. She wanted to fetch the pretty bed, that she might put it in the bridal chamber to be ready for her. The old toad bowed low to her in the water, and said, "Here is my son, he will be your husband, and you will live happily in the marsh by the stream."

    "Croak, croak, croak," was all her son could say for himself; so the toad took up the elegant little bed, and swam away with it, leaving Tiny all alone on the green leaf, where she sat and wept. She could not bear to think of living with the old toad, and having her ugly son for a husband. The little fishes, who swam about in the water beneath, had seen the toad, and heard what she said, so they lifted their heads above the water to look at the little maiden. As soon as they caught sight of her, they saw she was very pretty, and it made them very sorry to think that she must go and live with the ugly toads. "No, it must never be!" so they assembled together in the water, round the green stalk which held the leaf on which the little maiden stood, and gnawed it away at the root with their teeth. Then the leaf floated down the stream, carrying Tiny far away out of reach of land.

    Tiny sailed past many towns, and the little birds in the bushes saw her, and sang, "What a lovely little creature;" so the leaf swam away with her farther and farther, till it brought her to other lands. A graceful little white butterfly constantly fluttered round her, and at last alighted on the leaf. Tiny pleased him, and she was glad of it, for now the toad could not possibly reach her, and the country through which she sailed was beautiful, and the sun shone upon the water, till it glittered like liquid gold. She took off her girdle and tied one end of it round the butterfly, and the other end of the ribbon she fastened to the leaf, which now glided on much faster than ever, taking little Tiny with it as she stood. Presently a large cockchafer flew by; the moment he caught sight of her, he seized her round her delicate waist with his claws, and flew with her into a tree. The green leaf floated away on the brook, and the butterfly flew with it, for he was fastened to it, and could not get away.

    Oh, how frightened little Tiny felt when the cockchafer flew with her to the tree! But especially was she sorry for the beautiful white butterfly which she had fastened to the leaf, for if he could not free himself he would die of hunger. But the cockchafer did not trouble himself at all about the matter. He seated himself by her side on a large green leaf, gave her some honey from the flowers to eat, and told her she was very pretty, though not in the least like a cockchafer. After a time, all the cockchafers turned up their feelers, and said, "She has only two legs! How ugly that looks." "She has no feelers," said another. "Her waist is quite slim. Pooh! She is like a human being."

    "Oh! She is ugly," said all the lady cockchafers, although Tiny was very pretty. Then the cockchafer who had run away with her, believed all the others when they said she was ugly, and would have nothing more to say to her, and told her she might go where she liked. Then he flew down with her from the tree, and placed her on a daisy, and she wept at the thought that she was so ugly that even the cockchafers would have nothing to say to her. And all the while she was really the loveliest creature that one could imagine, and as tender and delicate as a beautiful roseleaf. 

    During the whole summer poor little Tiny lived quite alone in the wide forest. She wove herself a bed with blades of grass, and hung it up under a broad leaf, to protect herself from the rain. She sucked the honey from the flowers for food, and drank the dew from their leaves every morning. So passed away the summer and the autumn, and then came the winter,- the long, cold winter. All the birds who had sung to her so sweetly were flown away, and the trees and the flowers had withered. The large cloverleaf under the shelter of which she had lived, was now rolled together and shriveled up, nothing remained but a yellow withered stalk.

    She felt dreadfully cold, for her clothes were torn, and she was herself so frail and delicate, that poor little Tiny was nearly frozen to death. It began to snow too; and the snowflakes, as they fell upon her, were like a whole shovelful falling upon one of us, for we are tall, but she was only an inch high. Then she wrapped herself up in a dry leaf, but it cracked in the middle and could not keep her warm, and she shivered with cold. Near the wood in which she had been living lay a cornfield, but the corn had been cut a long time; nothing remained but the bare dry stubble standing up out of the frozen ground. It was to her like struggling through a large wood. Oh! How she shivered with the cold. She came at last to the door of a field mouse, who had a little den under the corn-stubble. There dwelt the field mouse in warmth and comfort, with a whole roomful of corn, a kitchen, and a beautiful dining room. Poor little Tiny stood before the door just like a little beggar-girl, and begged for a small piece of barleycorn, for she had been without a morsel to eat for two days.

    "You poor little creature," said the field-mouse, who was really a good old field-mouse, "come into my warm room and dine with me." She was very pleased with Tiny, so she said, "You are quite welcome to stay with me all the winter, if you like; but you must keep my rooms clean and neat, and tell me stories, for I shall like to hear them very much." And Tiny did all the field mouse asked her, and found herself very comfortable.

    "We shall have a visitor soon," said the field-mouse one day; "my neighbor pays me a visit once a week. He is better off than I am; he has large rooms, and wears a beautiful black velvet coat. If you could only have him for a husband, you would be well provided for indeed. But he is blind, so you must tell him some of your prettiest stories.

    But Tiny did not feel at all interested about this neighbor, for he was a mole. However, he came and paid his visit dressed in his black velvet coat.

    "He is very rich and learned, and his house is twenty times larger than mine," said the field mouse.

    He was rich and learned, no doubt, but he always spoke slightingly of the sun and the pretty flowers, because he had never seen them. Tiny was obliged to sing to him, "Lady-bird, lady-bird, fly away home," and many other pretty songs. And the mole fell in love with her because she had such a sweet voice; but he said nothing yet, for he was very cautious. A short time before, the mole had dug a long passage under the earth, which led from the dwelling of the field mouse to his own, and here she had permission to walk with Tiny whenever she liked. But he warned them not to be alarmed at the sight of a dead bird which lay in the passage. It was a perfect bird, with a beak and feathers, and could not have been dead long, and was lying just where the mole had made his passage. The mole took a piece of phosphorescent wood in his mouth, and it glittered like fire in the dark; then he went before them to light them through the long, dark passage. 

    When they came to the spot where lay the dead bird, the mole pushed his broad nose through the ceiling, the earth gave way, so that there was a large hole, and the daylight shone into the passage. In the middle of the floor lay a dead swallow, his beautiful wings pulled close to his sides, his feet and his head drawn up under his feathers; the poor bird had evidently died of the cold. It made little Tiny very sad to see it, she did so love the little birds; all the summer they had sung and twittered for her so beautifully. But the mole pushed it aside with his crooked legs, and said, "He will sing no more now. How miserable it must be to be born a little bird! I am thankful that none of my children will ever be birds, for they can do nothing but cry, 'Tweet, tweet,' and always die of hunger in the winter."

    "Yes, you may well say that, as a clever man!" exclaimed the field-mouse, "What is the use of his twittering, for when winter comes he must either starve or be frozen to death. Still birds are very high bred."

    Tiny said nothing; but when the two others had turned their backs on the bird, she stooped down and stroked aside the soft feathers which covered the head, and kissed the closed eyelids. "Perhaps this was the one who sang to me so sweetly in the summer," she said; "and how much pleasure it gave me, you dear, pretty bird."

    The mole now stopped up the hole through which the daylight shone, and then accompanied the lady home. But during the night Tiny could not sleep; so she got out of bed and wove a large, beautiful carpet of hay; then she carried it to the dead bird, and spread it over him; with some down from the flowers which she had found in the field-mouse's room. It was as soft as wool, and she spread some of it on each side of the bird, so that he might lie warmly in the cold earth. "Farewell, you pretty little bird," said she, "farewell; thank you for your delightful singing during the summer, when all the trees were green, and the warm sun shone upon us. Then she laid her head on the bird's breast, but she was alarmed immediately, for it seemed as if something inside the bird went "thump, thump." It was the bird's heart; he was not really dead, only benumbed with the cold, and the warmth had restored him to life.

    In autumn, all the swallows fly away into warm countries, but if one happens to linger, the cold seizes it, it becomes frozen, and falls down as if dead; it remains where it fell, and the cold snow covers it. Tiny trembled very much; she was quite frightened, for the bird was large, a great deal larger than herself,- she was only an inch high. But she took courage, laid the wool more thickly over the poor swallow, and then took a leaf which she had used for her own counterpane, and laid it over the head of the poor bird. The next morning she again stole out to see him. He was alive but very weak; he could only open his eyes for a moment to look at Tiny, who stood by holding a piece of decayed wood in her hand, for she had no other lantern. "Thank you, pretty little maiden," said the sick swallow; "I have been so nicely warmed, that I shall soon regain my strength, and be able to fly about again in the warm sunshine."

    "Oh," said she, "it is cold out of doors now; it snows and freezes. Stay in your warm bed; I will take care of you."

    Then she brought the swallow some water in a flower-leaf, and after he had drank, he told her that he had wounded one of his wings in a thorn-bush, and could not fly as fast as the others, who were soon far away on their journey to warm countries. Then at last he had fallen to the earth, and could remember no more, nor how he came to be where she had found him. The whole winter the swallow remained underground, and Tiny nursed him with care and love. Neither the mole nor the field mouse knew anything about it, for they did not like swallows. Very soon the springtime came, and the sun warmed the earth. Then the swallow bade farewell to Tiny, and she opened the hole in the ceiling which the mole had made. The sun shone in upon them so beautifully, that the swallow asked her if she would go with him; she could sit on his back, he said, and he would fly away with her into the green woods. But Tiny knew it would make the field-mouse very grieved if she left her in that manner, so she said, "No, I cannot."

    "Farewell, then, farewell, you good, pretty little maiden," said the swallow; and he flew out into the sunshine.

    Tiny looked after him, and the tears rose in her eyes. She was very fond of the poor swallow.

    "Tweet, tweet," sang the bird, as he flew out into the green woods, and Tiny felt very sad. She was not allowed to go out into the warm sunshine. The corn which had been sown in the field over the house of the field mouse had grown up high into the air, and formed a thick wood to Tiny, who was only an inch in height.

    "You are going to be married, Tiny," said the field mouse. "My neighbor has asked for you. What good fortune for a poor child like you. Now we will prepare your wedding clothes. They must be both woolen and linen. Nothing must be wanting when you are the mole's wife."

    Tiny had to turn the spindle, and the field mouse hired four spiders, who were to weave day and night. Every evening the mole visited her, and was continually speaking of the time when the summer would be over. Then he would keep his wedding-day with Tiny; but now the heat of the sun was so great that it burned the earth, and made it quite hard, like a stone. As soon, as the summer was over, the wedding should take place. But Tiny was not at all pleased; for she did not like the tiresome mole. Every morning when the sun rose, and every evening when it went down, she would creep out at the door, and as the wind blew aside the ears of corn, so that she could see the blue sky, she thought how beautiful and bright it seemed out there, and wished so much to see her dear swallow again. But he never returned; for by this time he had flown far away into the lovely green forest.

    When autumn arrived, Tiny had her outfit quite ready; and the field mouse said to her, "In four weeks the wedding must take place."

    Then Tiny wept, and said she would not marry the disagreeable mole.

    "Nonsense," replied the field mouse. "Now don't be obstinate, or I shall bite you with my white teeth. He is a very handsome mole; the queen herself does not wear more beautiful velvets and furs. His kitchen and cellars are quite full. You ought to be very thankful for such good fortune."

    So the wedding-day was fixed, on which the mole was to fetch Tiny away to live with him, deep under the earth, and never again to see the warm sun, because he did not like it. The poor child was very unhappy at the thought of saying farewell to the beautiful sun, and as the field mouse had given her permission to stand at the door, she went to look at it once more.

    "Farewell bright sun," she cried, stretching out her arm towards it; and then she walked a short distance from the house; for the corn had been cut, and only the dry stubble remained in the fields. "Farewell, farewell," she repeated, twining her arm round a little red flower that grew just by her side. "Greet the little swallow from me, if you should see him again."

    "Tweet, tweet," sounded over her head suddenly. She looked up, and there was the swallow himself flying close by. As soon as he spied Tiny, he was delighted; and then she told him how unwilling she felt to marry the ugly mole, and to live always beneath the earth, and never to see the bright sun any more. And as she told him she wept.

    "Cold winter is coming," said the swallow, "and I am going to fly away into warmer countries. Will you go with me? You can sit on my back, and fasten yourself on with your sash. Then we can fly away from the ugly mole and his gloomy rooms,- far away, over the mountains, into warmer countries, where the sun shines more brightly- than here; where it is always summer, and the flowers bloom in greater beauty. Fly now with me, dear little Tiny; you saved my life when I lay frozen in that dark passage."

    "Yes, I will go with you," said Tiny; and she seated herself on the bird's back, with her feet on his outstretched wings, and tied her girdle to one of his strongest feathers.

    Then the swallow rose in the air, and flew over forest and over sea, high above the highest mountains, covered with eternal snow. Tiny would have been frozen in the cold air, but she crept under the bird's warm feathers, keeping her little head uncovered, so that she might admire the beautiful lands over which they passed. At length they reached the warm countries, where the sun shines brightly, and the sky seems so much higher above the earth. Here, on the hedges, and by the wayside, grew purple, green, and white grapes; lemons and oranges hung from trees in the woods; and the air was fragrant with myrtle and orange blossoms. Beautiful children ran along the country lanes, playing with large gay butterflies; and as the swallow flew farther and farther, every place appeared still more lovely.

    At last they came to a blue lake, and by the side of it, shaded by trees of the deepest green, stood a palace of dazzling white marble, built in the olden times. Vines clustered round its lofty pillars, and at the top were many swallows' nests, and one of these was the home of the swallow who carried Tiny.

    "This is my house," said the swallow; "but it would not do for you to live there- you would not be comfortable. You must choose for yourself one of those lovely flowers, and I will put you down upon it, and then you shall have everything that you can wish to make you happy."

    "That will be delightful," she said, and clapped her little hands for joy.

    A large marble pillar lay on the ground, which, in falling, had been broken into three pieces. Between these pieces grew the most beautiful large white flowers; so the swallow flew down with Tiny, and placed her on one of the broad leaves. But how surprised she was to see in the middle of the flower, a tiny little man, as white and transparent as if he had been made of crystal! He had a gold crown on his head, and delicate wings at his shoulders, and was not much larger than Tiny herself. He was the angel of the flower; for a tiny man and a tiny woman dwell in every flower; and this was the king of them all.

    "Oh, how beautiful he is!" whispered Tiny to the swallow.

    The little prince was at first quite frightened at the bird, who was like a giant, compared to such a delicate little creature as himself; but when he saw Tiny, he was delighted, and thought her the prettiest little maiden he had ever seen. He took the gold crown from his head, and placed it on hers, and asked her name, and if she would be his wife, and queen over all the flowers.

    This certainly was a very different sort of husband to the son of a toad, or the mole, with my black velvet and fur; so she said, "Yes," to the handsome prince. Then all the flowers opened, and out of each came a little lady or a tiny lord, all so pretty it was quite a pleasure to look at them. Each of them brought Tiny a present; but the best gift was a pair of beautiful wings, which had belonged to a large white fly and they fastened them to Tiny's shoulders, so that she might fly from flower to flower. Then there was much rejoicing, and the little swallow who sat above them, in his nest, was asked to sing a wedding song, which he did as well as he could; but in his heart he felt sad for he was very fond of Tiny, and would have liked never to part from her again.

    "You must not be called Tiny any more," said the spirit of the flowers to her. "It is an ugly name, and you are so very pretty. We will call you Maia."

    "Farewell, farewell," said the swallow, with a heavy heart as he left the warm countries to fly back into Denmark. There he had a nest over the window of a house in which dwelt the writer of fairy tales. The swallow sang, "Tweet, tweet," and from his song came the whole story.


The End

Bully Stories

Stories are mean. They posses you, trying to get their tale heard, and aren't satisfied when you finish, and tell you you are hopeless, and will nag and nag at your brain until you write their story down.
More vivid stories are even more horrible, because they won't let you change it from what they put in.
Smaller ideas are sneaky, getting into your writing without you barely noticing, and making part of a giant novel, which is so complex that it takes you half-an-hour every morning to get into the 'story world' of you narrative.
Like Gail Carson Levine says, "It takes a mean author to write a good book." That is true, but also is, "It takes a bossy author to write a good story." Don't cave into the story, and don;t let it boss you around, like I have said many times, when YOU write, YOU are in charge, and if your story is ever bossing you around, Tell it to bugger  off, and that YOU are writing this story, so YOU can change it to anything YOU like.

 How to Know if you are being bullied:

1. If you have to keep re-writing and re-writing, and are never satisfied with the result.
2. If the characters you invent won't fit into the cycle
3.If you can't even write the first sentence down because it sounds stupid.

There are other ways too, but these are the ones I come across most often.

The third one is a tie between writers block and bully stories, but writers block is another story, but one helpful tip, get the first words out, no matter what, and the rest will follow easily.

To fight Bully stories back, ask yourself some questions about the plot, even if you already know the answers. Here are some examples.

WHO is the main character at this point?:
WHERE is the main character at this part of the story?:
WHAT do they do in the story, or if you don't know, What are they doing right now, and why are they doing it?:
WHEN does this part of the story take place/ what age is the character right now
WHY does this part of the story happen?:

If you need any more help, leave a comment!

Friday, September 21, 2012

Novelizeing fairy tales

Novelizing fairy tales is fun, good, and easier when beginning with writing.
I do not mean to say it is easy, for it is not, but having a base to work on can be helpful, especially if you are new to writing.

First, find a fairy tale that you like.
It needs to be one you can work with, so chose carefully. If it is your favorite fairy tale, that is great, because you know it well, and you like the characters and setting.
But it has to be one that have some un-answered  questions, ones that you have to answer.

There is a general rule when re-writing fairy tales.

If you are trying to just re-write it, then:
Try to explain, defiantly add,  but change try as little.
If you are trying to make it recognizable, change a few things, but never completely change every thing.

If you are changing big things, explain why in the fairy tale they were like that, for example, say the evil queen actually liked Snow White, tel us why she wanted to see her all the time, maybe she thought Snow White was really beautiful, so she watched her in her mirror so that she could get some beauty tips!

If you are changing it completely, good for you! As the writer, you can do absolutely anything, and no one can tell you not to! At least not now, But right now write what YOU want, and worry about publishers later!

Saturday, September 15, 2012

How to maker an origanal name

If you like a name, it shouldn't change if it is number one on the most common list, or if it hasn't even been used for the last one hundred years.

But if you want to have a name that everyone will remember, then read on.

For a long time, no one will be able to use the name Hermione.
Why is that?
It wasn't a common name before it was used, and that would have been the first time many people would have heard it, so it is fixed with that character, and the character will take it to the book's
grave.

Say you like the name Genevieve, but it is too common for you.
Another name like it is Guenevere, but again, maybe you don't like it because of the mythology tied to it.
Another one is Gwendolyn.

You may not like it, for a lot of different reasons, so keep changing until you get one that YOU think it right, and don't be afraid to change your character slightly, or change their appearance.

If you like a name, but it doesn't suit your character, than write it down, because, hey, it  might be some inspiration for another character.

If you end up changing your character, save your old one, because even if you don't end up using them, you can take small pieces, until the old character has made three new ones, and even then NEVER delete anything, anyone, for at least fifteen years, and even then, make sure you have milked every last, tiny drop, because what you think is insignificant, might later make a star character, or, a writer's true dream, a whole another story, or it might just be a character in a back story, one without a name, but there will always be of use.

Nouns for names, and making a name fit, discovering your character's characteristics

If you are using a noun for a name, that is great, because you are connecting the person to the thing/object that you have chosen, but you have to be careful.

Make sure you make it clear why they are called that.
Even if you don't write in in your book, you need to know why, so you can get an idea.

Say you have a main character named ... Ocean.
Why is she called Ocean?
Does she have deep, dark blue eyes with specks of green, which seem to be moving?

Remember, naming characters is different to naming babies, in many ways.
You can name them after their hobby or  the things they like.

Does she love to swim?
 Does she spend all of her time at the sea side?

Or you can give her an even deeper name, with a deeper name.

Maybe she is called Ocean because she washed up on shore in a basket made of river weeds, and so the person who found her called her Ocean.
That way is more story-like.

Or you can twist the name, or noun.
Say she was found in a storm, and you wanted her to be  called Rain.
The name Rain is a bit sweet, but if that is what your character is like, don't change it.
But say she is sassy, then you could still use Rain, as long as YOU think it suits her.
If you do, and are confident with the name, then everyone who reads it will be too.
But say you too think ot is a bit sweet, maybe twist it.

Say she was found in the pouring rain,  but her blanket had golden tread running through it, then you could call her Reign.

Or say she was a bit boisterous, that would be great as well.
But say you don't like the spelling, what should you do?

Change it!

It is your Story, your Character so who cares about what anyone else thinks?
Again, write what YOU like.
What is it that disturbs you about the spelling?
Is it  that their is to many high letters? Too many low?
The amazing thing about the English language is that we have so many combinations which have the same sound!

 You could spell it :
Rayne
Reighn
Reigne 
Or many other ways.

Maybe you find you want to change a little, into t a real name.

Rayna might be a good one, you could nickname her Ray.

But now, finding her as a baby in a storm may not work, or it might, if her full name WAS Rayna, but then again, it is all up to YOU.
It could, because the person who found her could have been dying of hypothermia, and the babies face was like a ray of sunshine, telling the person  that there was still hope.

Or maybe the person who named her was a bit weird.
Maybe because the person was dieing of Hypothermia, she called the child that, and the child calls herself Mia, as she is embarrassed by her name.
Or maybe she isn't, but other people tease her.
Maybe they call her Freeze, Snow, Ice or Cold(very UN-origanal bullies)
If they call her cold, what other horrible names could that spur?
They cold pretend to sneeze when they said her name, or call her 'Sick' or 'Ill', or anything like that.

How does the girl feel about that?
How does the person feel about it?

Maybe this person is female, and calls herself Mia's mum, or maybe she is never around, and hires a nanny to look after Mia, or maybe she leaves her by herself.

Do people mistake Mia's full first name?

When she meets old lady's, or anyone who doesn't know her very well, and says that her name is Mia, then do they call her Amelia, or Emelia?
Or maybe they think her name is one of those, and makes up knew nick-names, such as Ame, or Eme.
What does Mia say about that?  What does she think?
Is she polite, and doesn't tell them, to avoid immediate embarrassment?
Is she the type of girl who will never tell anyone they are wrong, but thinks about it all the time?
Or does she tell them softly that her name isn't Amelia, and that she prefers to be called Mia?
Or is she very full of herself, and is annoyed with them, and says out right that her name is MIA!?

Or was her mother sensible, and called her child Amelia, realizing the connection between the names?
Again, it is your choice,
Because when you write, YOU are in charge. 

Well done!

 You have changed the name Rain to Amelia, and in the process have learnt a lot more about your character!



More male names

Found on http://sihiri0.tripod.com/id7.html

Adam -Hebrew- Red earth

Ailen - Gaelic -Fire


Blaize - Latin -Stuttering


Brody -Norse - Brother


Chay -English -Man


Conrad -German -Wise adviser


Derwin - German - Animal lover


Eldridge -English -Wise adviser


Fontayne -English -Spring water


Goran - Greek -Farmer


Marden - English - Meadow near the water


Niam -Irish -Champion


Sol -Latin -The sun


Tate - English - Cheerful


Ward -English - Watchman


Aidan - Gaelic - Fire


Atherton -English -Spring village


Conan - Celtic - Mighty and wise


Cosmo - Greek -Universe


Deron -English -Water


Draigh - Welsh - Dragon


Dylan - Welsh - The sea god


Eiran - Irish - Peace


Forrest -Latin- Woods


Innis -Gaelic -Island


Kayne -Celtic -Bright and fair


Marsden -English -Pasture land near the sea


Mistral -French -Cold mediterranean wind


Mortimer -French -Stagnant water


Reuben - Hebrew - Behold a son


Wentworth - English -cottage in winter


Allard - German - Noble, enduring


Anan -Hebrew -Cloud


Beck -Celtic -A lonesome brook searching for a

river

Blase - Latin -Stuttering


Barrett -German -Strong as a bear


Darnell -French -Beloved


Dillon - Gaelic - Faithful


Duncan - Celtic -Dark warrior


Frewin - English - Free noble, friend


Galen -Greek - Tranquil


Leland - English -Shelter


Magnus- Latin -Great


Summerton - English -Summer settlement


Tade -Aramaic -Gift of god


Aaron - Hebrew - Enlightened


Cade -Welsh- Battle


Cullen - Celtic - Handsome


Daegal -unknown -meaning uncertain


Dashiel -French -Ash tree of the elves


David -Hebrew -Beloved one


Earthan -English -of the earth


Ewart -French -One who serves water


Kaine -Welsh - Beautiful


Lazar -Arabic -Best appearance


Llewellyn -Welsh- Like a lion


Lucius - Latin -Light


Luke -Latin - Light


Osran -unknown -meaning uncertain


Snowden - English -Place sheltered from snow


Torin -Latin -Tender


Washington - English -Watery site


Wayde -Anglo-saxon - Wanderer


Ballard -English -Dancing song


Brady -Irish -Spirited One


Brenainn - Irish - Sword


Derrick - German - Ruler


Elfed - Welsh -Autumn


Gaian -Greek - Child of earth


Jasion -Greek - meaning uncertain


Kelsey - German -From the water


Killian -Irish -War


Laris -Latin -Cheerful


Leander -Greek- Lion man


Leif -Norse - meaning uncertain


Thayer - German - Nation's army


Trent -Welsh/Irish -Journey through


Vivian -Latin - Alive


Xenos -Greek - Stranger


Zander - Greek - World protector


Zohar -Hebrew -Radiant light


Adar -Hebrew -Fire


Daibheid -Irish - Beloved


Dilwyn - unknown -meaning uncertain


Emlyn - Latin -Charming


Griffin -Greek -A mythical Creature


Heath -English -Wasteland, heath


Mars -Roman- God of war


Merrill -Irish -Sea-bright


Michael -Hebrew - Like unto the Lord


Shea -Celtic -Fairy place


Troy -Irish- Foot soldier


Ao -Maori - Planet earth


Calder - Celtic - Stony river


Chalfont -English -Spring


Chalmers -Teutonic - Lord of the manor


Damek - unknown -meaning uncertain


Derek - Teutonic -Ruler of the people


Douglas -Gaelic -From the dark waters


Eliphas -Greek - meaning unknown


Erik -German -Honourable ruler


Finn -Irish- Fair


Galahad - English-One of King Arthur's Knights who was a

real gentleman

Jorah - Hebrew - Autumn rain


Kadir -Arabian -Green


Keanu -Hawaiian -Cool breeze over the mountains


Lindsey -English -Lindon trees near the water


Mark -Latin - Warlike


Tiordan -Gaelic -King's poet


Seth -Hebrew -Appointed by God


Wolfe- Teutonic -Wolf


Xavier- Spanish -Bright


Adonis- Greek - Beautiful youth


Aindreas -Irish - Manly


Alaric - German - Noble ruler


Azriel - Hebrew - Angel of the Lord


Bevan -Welsh - Warrior's son


Bram -Gaelic -Raven


Callum - Celtic - Dove


Cornelius -Latin - Battle-horn


Dallan - Celtic- Wise


Dante -unknown -meaning uncertain


Freeman -English - Born free


Gerard - German - Spear-brave


Keith -Gaelic -The wind


Marc -French -War-like


Orion - Greek -Hunter


Regan - unknown -meaning uncertain


Saul - Hebrew - Ask for'


Ulrich - Danish - Wolf


Aeneas - Greek - Praiseworthy


Alastair -Greek - World protector


Chilton -English- Village spring


Darius - Greek - Wealthy


Devin - Celtic - Poet


Elwin -English -Friend of the elves


Gabriel -Hebrew -God is my strength


Nicholas -Greek - Victory of the people


Paxton - German - Traveller from a distant land

Rehan -unknown -meaning uncertain

Rodney- Teutonic - Island Clearing


Zen -Japanese -Meditation

Male names, perfect for a fantasy story

Found on http://sihiri0.tripod.com/id7.html
Aelfdane - Danish elf

Aelfdene - from the elfin valley


Alberich -Norse- myth name (a dwarf)


Alfrigg -Norse - myth name (a dwarf)


Alston - Old English -From the Elf's Abode


Alvin -Old English -elf wine, noble friend


Avery,- Aelfric, Aubrey - elf ruler


Brokk- Norse - myth name (dwarf)


Dain -Norse -myth name (a dwarf)


Drake- English - Dragon


Durin -German -Mythical Dwarf


Eitri - Norse -myth name (a dwarf)


Elden, Eldan, Eldon, Ealhdun, Ealdun-from the elves' valley


Elvin -Celtic/Gaelic- Friend of Elves


Elvy, Elvey - elf warrior


Fafnir, Fafner- Norse - myth name (a dragon)


Foster -Latin - Forest Guardian


Genius- myth name (a guardian spirit)


Hefeydd -Celtic -myth name (father of Rhiannon)


Hreidmar -Norse - myth name(dwarf king)


Kalen, Kailen, Kalan, Kallan, Kheelan, Kellen -

Irish/Celtic -warrior

Nidhug, Nidhogg - Norse- myth name (a dragon)


Oberon -From Shakespeare -King of the Fairies


Oren, Orin -Gaelic/Hebrew - Fairy, pale-skinned/pine tree


Puck -From Shakespeare -Currently unknown


Roosevelt -Scandinavian - Field of Roses


Sindri - Norse -myth name (a dwarf)


Suelita -Spanish - Little Lily


Warren - German, English,Teutonic, French - watchman

Rare, some traditional, mythological female names, perfect for a fantasy story

Names found on: http://sihiri0.tripod.com/id6.html

Aideen - Gaelic - Fire



Aline -Gaelic - Fire




Althea - Greek - Healing
                                                                                             

April -Latin- Spring                                          



Aurora - Latin - Dawn



Blenda - Teutonic -Dazzling



Bride - Irish -Strong



Diana - Latin -Divine



Erina - Gaelic- of Ireland



Gaiane - Greek - Child of earth



Keelie - Irish - Warrior maiden



Milla - German - Strenght



Nevada - Spanish -Snowy



Panthea -Greek -She who honours all the gods



Risa -Latin - Laughter



Spring - English - Spring



Zefira - Italian -Breeze



Aithne - Irish - Little fire



Aki -Japanese -Autumn



Austin - Latin -Majestic



Irinas - Irish - Peace



Garda -Teutonic -Protected



Gwyneth -Welsh - Happiness, blessed



Jairia - Hebrew - Inlightened by God



Mardella -English -Meadow near the water



Rhiannon -Welsh - Nymph



Riona -Celtic -Queenly



Saith - Welsh - Seven



Shandeigh -English -Rambunctious



Storm - Norse - Tempest, storm



Zerlinda -Hebrew -Beautiful dawn



Abra -Hebrew -Earth mother



Aingeal - Irish -Angel



Anastasia -Greek -Resurrection



Danika - Slavonic - Morning star



Ellendea -Greek - God's light



Fioon - Gaelic - Fair one



Gabriella - Hebrew - God is my strength



Keely -Irish -Warrior maiden



Lourdes -unknown -meaning uncertain



Lysandra -Greek- To liberate



Nirel - Hebrew- Light of god



Shahla - Afghani - Beautiful eyes



Sidney - English -Fertile land



Vesta -Latin - Roman goddess of fire



Willow - English -From the willow tree



Abigail - Hebrew - Father's joy



Alyssa - Greek - Wise



Amarantha -Greek -Unfading



Aura - Greek - Breath



Badriyah -Arabic -Full moon



Dido -African -Teacher; enlightener



Ethelind -Teutonic - Nobly wise



Gaea -Greek -Earth, the Goddess



Haldis- Teutonic -Stone spirit



Isla -French -Island



Laverne -Latin - Spring-like



Leticia -Latin- Gladness



Samantha -Aramaic - Listener



Skylar - Welsh -Sheltering



Teresa - Greek - Summer; the harvest



Vedis -Teutonic -Sacred spirit of the forest



Verda -French -Green, spring-like



Whitney -English -Land near the water



Zinevra -Celtic -White wave



Ardith - unknown -meaning uncertain



Eira -Welsh - Snow



Euphemia - Greek -Auspicious speech



Juno -Latin - Queen of Heaven



Laeticia -Latin - Gladness



Lidiya/Lydia -Greek - Beautiful



Miranda -Latin - Extraordinary



Peta -Sioux - Fire



Phoebe- Greek - Pure, bright



Skye -Norse - The heavens



Solaire -Latin- Sunshine and air



Tallulah -American Indian - Laughing water



Zeena -Greek - Wecoming one



Adrienne -Latin - Dark lady of the sea



Amara - Sanskrit -Immortal



Aolani - Hawaiian -Heavenly cloud



Edana -Irish - Little fiery one



Eirlys- Welsh -Snowdrop



Ethne -Irish- Little fire



Guinevere -Celtic - White wave



Idona -Norse - Labour



Lilith - Arabic -Woman of the night



Maaia -Maori -Courage



Raina -German -Mighty



Riana -Latin - Golden



Sadira - Arabic - Ostrich returning from water



Saraid - Celtic - Excellent



Saruk -Arabic -East wind



Sera -Italian -Destiny



Siran - Armenian -Lovely



Tabitha -Aramaic - One of gentle grace



Terah -Latin- The earth



Wanda - Slavonic -Traveler; wanderer



Adamina -Hebrew- Red earth



Astral - Latin - From the word "Astra" meaning 'star'



Astrid - Norse - Divine strength



Badria -Afghani -Moonlike



Cassandra -Greek -One whose warnings are ignored



Crystal -Greek - Without deception



Cynthia -Greek -Moon goddess



Daganya -Hebrew -Ceremonial grain



Eartha - English -Earth

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Gabrielle -Hebrew -God is my strength



Leilani -Hawaiian -Heavenly flower; sky child



Nairi - Armenian -Land of canyons



Ramona - Teutonic -Wise protector



Vanora - Celtic- White wave



Velda - Teutonic -Very wise



Wendy - Celtic- The wanderer



Xena - Greek - Distant place



Audris - Teutonic -Wealthy



Bebhinn -Irish -Melodious lady



Briana- Celtic- Strength, virtue and honor



Canace - Latin - Pure and glowing



Ceridwen -Welsh - Fair poetry



Cybill- Greek -Prophetess



Devin -Celtic -Poet



Jennifer -Welsh - White wave



Kalliope -Greek- Beautiful voice



Moselle -Hebrew -Taken from the water



Niamh -Irish - Champion


Gullveig - Norse - myth name (a witch)



Pherenice ~ ~ 'heavenly blue flower'



Rosalva ~ ~ 'pretty rose'



Sarette ~ ~ 'princess'



Shea ~ ~ 'fairy palace'



Sorcha ~ ~ 'dark princess'



Tania ~ ~ 'fairy queen'



Tertia ~ ~ '3rd born fairy'



Tatiana ~ ~ 'fairy queen'



Tyballa ~ ~ 'peoples princess'



Tryphosa ~ ~ 'the delicate'



Tita ~ ~ 'safe'



Trixy ~ ~ 'she that makes me happy'



Tunder Hungarian ~ ~ 'fairy'



Una ~ ~ 'the one'



Vashti Persian ~ ~ 'the beautiful'



Xylia ~ ~ 'of the forest'



Zuleika ~ ~ 'the fair'



Aethelwyne- friend of the elves



Arethusa - nymph



Blossom -English -Flower-like



Breena - Celtic/Gaelic -Fairy Land


Faerydae - dark child a gift from the fairies

Faylinn - English -Fairy Kingdom

Fay -French - Fairy or Elf

Faye -Old French -Fairy

Fayette -French- Little fairy

Shaylee - Celtic/Gaelic -Fairy princess of the field

Shea -Irish - Fairy palace

Tana - Slavic - Fairy Queen

Tania - Russian -Fairy queen

Tanya - Russian -Fairy queen

Tatiana -Slavic -Fairy Queen

Tenanye - cheerful fairy queen

Tianna -fairy queen